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2013년 1월 10일 목요일

Adora Svitak


      I saw the video about Adora Svitak. Her lecture is about children and adults. She believes there are lots of things that adults must learn from children. She uses many specific supporting details to make the audience believe her speech.
     Adults underestimate children despite the fact that children have enough ability to succeed things. There are many examples of children who changed the world's history. There are many examples of children who had creative ideas.
     See!! Children have enough ability and are very talented. Adults really don't need to worry about them. They should not disregard children. They must believe us and concede that we are great.
     Adults!!!! Please stop thinking you are always greater than children. Of course there are lots of things that we should learn from adults, but remember there are also things that adults must learn from us because children have things that adult don't have.
Thank You.

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  1. You wrote: "There are many examples of children who changed the world's history. There are many examples of children who had creative ideas." But, you haven't given examples to support these sentences.

    It would also be helpful to your reader to show what kinds of things adults could or should learn from children.

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